Superpower805

My original story that I hope to publish as a comic book someday(Hence the lack of physical description). Feedback and constructive criticism is both welcomed and expected, but please be nice about it. Expect updates and more issues based on feedback.                                           Whiplash #1 A jolt, heavy breathing, a cold sweat on his face. Donavan Chambers recovers from yet another rude awakening, the result of the same nightmare he'd been having for the last two years. "Damn truck." He said to himself as he ran his hand through his brown hair. Donny then proceeded to take in his surroundings: a dull gray bedroom with hole

My original story idea that I hope to publish as a comic book someday(hense the lack of physical description. Feedback and constructive criticism are both welcomed and hoped for, but please be nice about it. Expect updates and more issues based on criticism, thank you. :)